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I shook severely Every nerve in my body tingled but not a good tingle not an orgasmic tingle but a heavy sandy tingle It ran deep through my veins my body stiffened like a drying cement walk way I felt nauseous like my insides no longer safely rested in me but started making their way up my throat I tried to take a deep breath but my lips would not open they felt sewn shut The only other feeling I had besides the unbearable pain could only be described as a horrid fear I did not even know what I feared That did not seem to stop the incessant thoughts brought on by this fear though I thought What the hell just happened Where am I Why is there an overwhelming pain crawling over my body like worms coming out of mud during a storm I managed to turn my head towards the only light I could see The intensity of the light burned my eyes just as the sun did when I could not stop staring at it as a kid for the simple fact mom said not to It is almost euphoric everything around you disappears not even your troubles can bother you This light gave me that same lukewarm feeling It fought off the sand and it battled against the worms engrossing me It made me realize what just happened My train of thought or fear was shattered ARE YOU OK SON CAN YOU HEAR ME I groaned thinking to myself Cant this person see Im in pain Why is he yelling at me Again the mans monstrous voice beckoned my response SON IF YOU CAN HEAR ME I NEED YOU TO LET ME KNOW DONT WORRY WERE GOING TO GET YOU OUT OF THERE Suddenly I felt trapped again I could not find that comforting light in the corner of my eye Where who wha I could not manage to
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