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Childhood is the best and unforgettable time of a person Its the time when we can feel happiness and love from people around us However as time goes by we all grow up and there are a lot of changes inside of us I personally experienced an unforgettable event that became a turning point of my childhood This happened in Vietnam when I was nine years old I was a stubborn daughter and my parents had a hard time getting me do something for them I never did it right after they told me I always waited until the fifth time they reminded me One day I begged my mother to let me go to the supermarket with her First my mom would not let me go with her because she knew how good a troublemaker I was I started to use my little persuasive tragedy which always worked I tried to make a cute and innocent face to beg my mom Mommy please let me go I will be good I promise to follow you everywhere you go and I will not cause any trouble Please mommy Finally she let me go She held my hand while we were shopping On the way going up to the next floor suddenly I saw a pretty moving doll in the store downstairs Immediately without a word I let go of my moms hand and ran fast downstairs Unexpectedly I slipped and fell down on the long stairs like a heavy ball rolling and bouncing down the stairs When I stopped I felt so dizzy I saw a blurry view then it turn into black I could not remember anything that happened next When I opened my eyes the view looked strange and the smell of this room was weird That room was filled with the medicine smell I can feel the different between this bed with my bed at home The mattress and pillow was
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