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I was blindfolded by my friend Daniel and I was led through a pathway I had no idea where I was going but the crunching of the leaves as I walked the chirping of the grasshoppers and a lemon smell made me think of a park The blindfold was pulled and as I opened my eyes I saw the rusty swings the jungle Jim and majestic trees rustling I was in my favorite place I never thought I would spend the most magical night in a park Would youThe night was perfect nothing could ruin it I could feel the gentle cold breeze flowing through the park Daniel pulled my hand and we kept walking until we reached the perfect hill with an amazing view to the dark sky We laid down in the freshly cut grass and looked into the twinkling stars in the sky It was amazing the moon was out and it was as if the moons light was creating different colors with the stars blue and yellow all aroundAs we lay together all of a sudden we saw a shooting star It was amazing it was so bright I made a wish on it hoping that the night would never end There was a quiet solitude no one could have changed the peacefulness you could feel and I could have fallen asleep knowing I was safe I looked out into the horizon and saw the shimmering water The moon reflected on it like a mirror and the ducks swimming all around it As I woke up the next morning I felt all cozy and warm until I realized Daniel and I spent the night at the park just talking and looking at the stars I looked up into the aqua blue sky and I noticed the sun coming up It was the most brilliant sunrise Ive ever saw the sun had different hues all around it crimson burgundy and yellow It
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