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The Vitality of Storytelling in Human Life as Described in Kaye Gibbon's "Ellen Foster"

This paper is about the themes in a novel written by Kaye Gibbons'. The author focuses on the importance of storytelling in the main character, Ellen Foster's life.
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Jenn's feedback:

"Overall, all of the text that you wrote is excellent. The formatting is perfect, which increases reading comprehension and cohesion, and you have done a great job with writing conventions. There are a few minor errors here and there, but you should be able to catch those with a round of proofreading. The main thing that needs to be done with the paper is to add a clear introduction and conclusion. Right now, the first paragraph does not make it clear what the purpose of your essay is. You can fix this by giving some background information about the topic and ending the introduction with a thesis statement that communicates the goal of your paper and how you are going to achieve it. The conclusion should then summarize the main points you made in the body of your essay and relate them to the thesis statement. Last, the content of your paper is well-written. As someone who has not read this particular novel before, I felt like more details should be provided so that the reader can better understand what you are trying to communicate."

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