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Running down the field chasing what seemed to be my life I had done itso many it came so natural I never fell I was the start player Neverthinking about getting hurt but about the next time I would score Iguess you could say it was love The whistle blew telling us it was timeto rest Jogging over to the side line to meet my coach to tell me mygood and bad also to give me my assignments for the next quarter Ilooked over at the other team and felt that it was my time to scoreI wasnt really aware of what happened so I am just telling you what Iknow I felt a slight tug on my shirt and then I was pushed The pushwas not an accidentally push for it had enough force to knock me downI pulled my arms almost trying to cradle myself on impact Instead myarm snapped the wrong way breaking it I of course did not feel thepain instantly and got up on the same arm I was pissed trying to findthe person who did it I took a step in her direction and suddenly ithit me The pain felt like my arm was being run over by one thousandtrucks over and over again I feel to the ground tears running down myfaceFuck I yelled it seemed to be as loud as I could The play almost stopped immediately Everyone heard what I had said butno one cared because they all knew I was in a great deal of pain Mycoach didnt even ask how I was our eyes met and she knew She couldtell that it was broken My step-dad had other ideas he was very calmabout the situation He thought that I was over exaggerating and I justneed to place my arm in a cool pool and I would be better in a few daysMy mom had a different perspective on how bad it was Walking off
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