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Introductory paragraph I am a movie fanatic When friends want to know what picture won the Oscar in 1980 or who played the police chief in Jaws they ask me My friends though have stopped asking me if I want to go out to the movies The problems in getting to the theater the theater itself and the behavior of some patrons are all reasons why I often wait for a movie to show up on TV Thesis First supporting paragraph First of all just getting to the theater presents difficulties Leaving a home equipped with a TV and a video recorder isnt an attractive idea on a humid cold or rainy night Even if the weather cooperates there is still a thirty-minute drive to the theater down a congested highway followed by the hassle of looking for a parking space And then there are the lines After hooking yourself to the end of a human chain you worry about whether there will be enough tickets whether you will get seats together and whether many people will sneak into the line ahead of you Second supporting paragraph Once you have made it to the box office and gotten your tickets you are confronted with the problems of the theater itself If you are in one of the run-down older theaters you must adjust to the musty smell of seldom-cleaned carpets Escaped springs lurk in the faded plush or cracked leather seats and half the seats you sit in seem loose or tilted so that you sit at a strange angle The newer twin and quad theaters offer their own problems Sitting in an area only one-quarter the size of a regular theater moviegoers often have to put up with the sound of the movie next door This is especially jarring when the other movie involves racing cars or a karate war and you are trying to enjoy a quiet love story And whether
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