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Purpose To show how being a freshman at SUNY Oneonta altered the life of one boyHes from a normal town with parents that love him Jack and Judy Gallow dropped their child off on a warm august day at Suny Oneonta with pride His name is John Hes the first is his family to go to college he is the first step in the transition of his family His father Jack owns a large pluming firm the second largest in Rocklyn County It was his fathers before him and will one day belong to John The business is expanding so it is Jacks plan that his son can go to college study business take over the firm and bring it to the next level John has a lot of pressure on him and his life planned out Its his mission here in college to live up to his familys expectationsJohn has two younger sisters Christine 12 and Annie 10 Christine is blind and requires a lot on attention It is Johns hope to be successful enough to take care of his sister when his parents can no longer His sister Annie is a child prodigy with an IQ of 149 Shes in all the gifted classes Next year at the age of 11 she will start high school Annie loves and looks up to her older brother They have a wonderful relationship When John was failing 12th grade calculus Annie tutored him he ended up with an AThe family is well off Jack Gallow comes from a large family the oldest of six children He was born and raised in Nyac As a child he used to sit on the shore of the Hudson River by the Tapanz Bridge and watch the cars go by wondering where all the people were going Jack like his daughter is very intelligent and excelled in school His dream was to be an engineer build bridges and bring pride
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