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I was born in a small country town in Oklahoma so intially the move to NYC was quite the shocker I went from a 200 person class to a 2000 person class in the matter of days Every morning I found myself disgusted with the traffic and overall hustle and bustle of the big city Finally I decided I needed to experience the city January third is a day I will never forget I was headed to a local cafe that I was told had the best cup of coffee in the city Everyone in the city drinks coffee After taking a wrong turn and walking about 6 blocks out of my way I decided I should double back and try again a different day Just as soon as I turned around there was a loud noise and I felt like I had been hit by a NFL line backer I thought that a cabbie had finally gone completly insane hopped the cab on the sidewalk and run me over The only problem with that was I never saw a car Once I finally realized I had been shot I thought this is how I am going to die I always thought it was going to be a more dramatic death You know the type where you die saving an elderly couple that has been married 60 years from a burning building No not me I was shot from behind I didnt even get to see the person that I thought was taking my life Coward Finally someone came over to me and said everything was going to be alright When I looked up I saw this little elderly couple standing there cell phones in hand saving my life I was taken to the hospital and underwent four major surgeries in the course of 12 hours I actually died for 4 minutes Just as they were going to pronounce my death another doctor came in
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