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Kibin. (2024). Understanding and preventing lyme disease. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/understanding-and-preventing-lyme-disease-e1Hg1o4h
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Bob's feedback:
"Your essay is packed with useful information not only for understanding Lyme disease but for preventing it as well. The structure of the paper is very good. I do wonder if you spend too much time discussing the ticks that carry the disease (well over a full page).
Transitions throughout most of the paper are solid, but the introduction could use a little bit of work. It reads as a list of facts about the disease rather than an essay intro with its own flow. Rather than packing in figures and statistics, think about how you might present the topic in conversation.
Be sure to proofread as there are small but frequent errors throughout the text."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). Understanding and preventing lyme disease. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/understanding-and-preventing-lyme-disease-e1Hg1o4h
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("Understanding and Preventing Lyme Disease.")
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"Understanding and Preventing Lyme Disease." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/understanding-and-preventing-lyme-disease-e1Hg1o4h
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1. "Understanding and Preventing Lyme Disease." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/understanding-and-preventing-lyme-disease-e1Hg1o4h.
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"Understanding and Preventing Lyme Disease." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/understanding-and-preventing-lyme-disease-e1Hg1o4h.
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