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An In-depth Look at the Concept Behind the Natural Law Theory

This paper highlights the importance of natural law theory. According to the author, natural law theory reflects natural moral order, embracing overall goodness and equality while rejecting evil.
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"The formatting of your paper is excellent, which is essential for writing cohesion and reading comprehension. I do advise that you make sure to remove the extra spacing between paragraphs, though. Overall, you also have a reasonably good handle on writing conventions. Several grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure errors need to be resolved, but there are not so many that the readability of your writing is impacted. The aspect of the paper that needs the most work is the organization. This is because the document does not appear to have an introduction or conclusion. An introduction should include a brief amount of background information about the topic and a thesis statement that tells the reader the specific aspects of the issue you intend to cover and why they are essential. This will communicate the purpose of your paper. The body of the paper should then align with the thesis statement. This will show that you remained focused on your topic throughout your writing. Last, the paper should end with a conclusion summarizing the main points made in the document's body and relating them to the thesis statement. Working on the organization will also improve the content of the paper. Some areas of the piece feel repetitive as if you did not know how to elaborate on a topic. Referring back to your thesis statement may help eliminate this repetitiveness."

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