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Understanding Proxemics, the Study of Spacial Relations

This paper explains proxemics, which is the study of spatial relations among people.
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"This paper is well organized and informative, but there are some improvements to suggest. Use commas when necessary to clarify meanings. For example, in the second paragraph, a comma after “area” clarifies the meaning of “in a fixed area such as color.” We write the possessive form of “people” as “people’s,” and of “person” as “person’s.” Pay attention to details such as the spelling of “Applebee’s.” Ranges of numbers should be separated by an en dash (–), which is made through a character code on a PC or option-dash on a Macintosh. “Handshake” is one word; it is spelled two ways in this paper, which reveals inconsistency. Note that we write “too close” and not “to close.” This paper has some redundancy, which is not incorrect, but can be more concise. For example, we can delete “different” from “many different ways,” and “together” from “intertwined together.” Be sure to run a grammar checker to reveal and correct grammatical issues."

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