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Bridget's feedback:
"You make good use of detailed yet reader-friendly information in introducing your audience to data mining. Laying out the main tasks (para. 2) before diving into specifics, for example, gives the reader the tools to follow the discussion. I'm wary of the rather long list on page two; do make sure to check in with your style guide for formatting. The software list toward the end, followed by the profiles for some of the titles, is a little unclear, including how you chose which company/products to profile. I also wonder if the reader will easily navigate that long list of names. For more visual and organizational clarity, have you considered using section headings (perhaps the latter part would fall under "Real World Applications") or an appendix to present the specific company/product writeups?
Other tasks will include proofreading. There are some misspellings or typos that should be caught and cleaned up, e.g., "resented" (probably "represented"), and check your style guide for capitalization rules. Likely you will not capitalize "data mining.""
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Kibin. (2024). How different sectors use data mining. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-different-sectors-use-data-mining-Di7ecte3
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