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Kibin. (2024). How pets make life better. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-pets-make-life-better-aWNR01xN
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"I enjoyed reading about your pets, especially the turtles! Exploring the links to mental health brings depth to these personal details, but the ending throws the reader off a bit by defining the purpose of the essay as oriented around animal intelligence. That aspect may work better in a body paragraph, with a concluding paragraph returning to the original purpose and topic as defined in the introduction.
Your paragraphs are structured well, with the ideas presented logically. Every so often a claim is made that would be better presented with sourced evidence or a statistic. Another next step will be proofreading, as there are still a few errors or typos that distract the reader and impact ethos and clarity."
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Kibin. (2024). How pets make life better. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-pets-make-life-better-aWNR01xN
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("How Pets Make Life Better.")
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1. "How Pets Make Life Better." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-pets-make-life-better-aWNR01xN.
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"How Pets Make Life Better." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-pets-make-life-better-aWNR01xN.
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