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"You make good use of focused paragraphs and an overall solid essay structure to ensure the reader is guided smoothly and clearly through the ideas. Topic sentences, signposting, and similar further enhance readability.
The current draft sits uneasily between personal reaction and analysis of a text. More frequent direct reference to the text (quotations) will help evidence engagement, as the current discussion mostly alights on broad statements. In responding to the text, consider context: this includes the surrounding text and its key arguments, as well as the historical context, which comes in and out of play in this current discussion; this becomes problematic because the introduction and conclusion suggest more rigorous historical contextualization that is drowned out by personal reaction. How to balance these two things will ultimately depend on the prompt, so as you move forward, review the prompt and guidelines so you can make sure the next draft responds to those parameters."
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Kibin. (2024). Why i wouldn't want to live on thomas more's island of utopia. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/why-i-wouldnt-want-to-live-on-thomas-mores-island-of-utopia-C408rJWy
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