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I am going to start by asking how many times have you done somethingwrong or felt like someone you know has done something wrong Everyonehas felt that way so I am here to talk about ways to speak up if youever felt this wayI am going to share a story There was this girl who found out aboutsomething in the worst way possible She was best friends with this guynamed Jai They did and talked about everything together Jai was datingthis girl in July They were pretty serious She could only dream of arelationship like they had Jai would tell her about it because theywere friends and she was so happy for them Suspicion started becauseall of a sudden Jai stopped telling her stories Jai got so quiet aboutthe relationship He talked about her less and less She thought theirrelationship was over She questions Jai about Ariana and he would saythings like Oh she is fine and Um yeahWhen she was jogging one evening in July she caught a glimpse Jai withtwo men The men were showing him pictures of a girl who lookedextremely familiar She did not think anything of it so she kept onjogging Later that night at home she just happened to be watching thenews and a story came on and in the story the two men she seen earlierwere actually policemen As the story went on Jais mug shot came on thescreen The story was about a teenage boy who murdered hisgirlfriendShe just found out her best friend murdered his girlfriendShe was best friends with a murderer She was furious She could notbelieve it she was so upsetWell that girl was me I was best friends with a murderer I knewsomething was going on but I never would of suspected that he killedsomebody I was so clueless about this concealed terMy advice to you is that if you ever feel like something is wrong otsomeone is acting extremely suspicious about something
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