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We Should Monitor the Sun's Solar Flares

This is an essay in which the author discusses the impact a solar storm would have on the earth. The author discusses the topic of a solar storm from an analytical perspective and ends the essay with a persuasive tone about the benefits of technology.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have created an introduction that provides a lot of facts and gives the reader a sense of what is to come. Because of the number of facts that are present, the lack of citations is of concern. Any information that you obtained from another source should be cited to avoid plagiarism issues. The introduction does not end with a thesis statement that could guide the direction of the paper. As the paper is written, it is unclear if it is supposed to be about solar storms, your opinion about not having electricity, or you persuading people to think that technology is a good thing. There are a number of grammar, spacing, and punctuation errors throughout the text. Once you have decided a direction for the paper, make sure that your conclusion summarizes the main points you made in the essay and reiterates the thesis statement. "

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