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It was like my life flashed before my eyes witnessing my life go do the drain I was headed for the worst Growing up in a home with eleven other siblings I received barely any attention I decided for myself that I was going to act out to gain the attention that I needed I was young with a very bad attitude and I felt like the world owed me everything I was hostile to my parents my teachers and anyone who stepped in my way Although there were people who were helping me turn my life around for the better My science teacher who was also the basketball coach told me to meet him in the gym after school dressed and ready to play I walked in the gym where I found myself in competition with thirty other girls We were being evaluated to see who would make the varsity basketball team After intense tryouts I made the team When I began playing basketball I became a new person with a changed attitude I no longer needed my parents to give me attention because I received all the attention I needed from basketball In my mind I was the new Jordan Averaging ten points a game I was the new star at school I took my fame home to my parents and surprisingly they were proud of me I explained to them how I felt and from there our relationship changed for the better If it wasnt for basketball I dont know where I would be
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