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High school is a strange time After three years of trying to develop identity and friends in middle school students are expected to mature immediately on the first day of ninth grade but I never did this I never fully realized in the earlier grades how important high school success as measured by GPA would be to my future life and as a result I am applying to college with seemingly contradictory measures of my ability to perform college-level work If I had worked and studied hard rather than hanging out with friends and viewing high school as an opportunity to socialize I would not have to apply to school with a 1300 SAT and a 27 GPA Had I taken my grades in my earlier years seriously I could have been a colleges dream candidate This year I have made an earnest effort to improve my work ethic My grade point average is rising and my study habits are improving However after performing poorly for three years my GPA cannot reflect the transformation I underwent at the start of this year Dedicated to making something of myself I finally matured and am now trying to lessen the consequences of my past actions Armed with my new attitude and my understanding of the extreme importance of earning good grades to signal my capacity to work responsibly I assure you that I will never revert to the student I once was In retrospect I believe that it was my inability to choose my classes that resulted in my lack of enthusiasm on the ride to school each morning I enjoy the freedom to pursue my own interests and anxiously anticipate the ability to choose my own class schedule in college While I understand that college will be significantly more challenging than high school I have always found it easier to study for a class that interests me I am also willing to accept the fact that
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