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A large crowd of spectators was gathering around the frail almostlifeless body of a man who had just collapsed and was lying on a graveldriveway I yelled for someone to call for help as I noticed that theman was barely breathing The gravity of the situation then hit me Ibegan to administer CPR as my brain raced with thoughts of what else Icould do Over thirty minutes passed before the paramedics finallyarrived but by this point the cardiac arrest had already taken itstollThat man was my grandfather and that incident was the most challengingand devastating situation I have ever faced It caused me to be resolutein my determination to learn all that I could work as hard as I couldand receive the training available to me to prevent such tragedies fromoccurring It caused me to want to be a doctorAt the Ohio State University I was able to realize my academiccompetitiveness and this experience gave me the confidence to know thatI could succeed I initially was nervous about my courses especiallyorganic chemistry due to my previous academic hardships at PurdueUniversity I knew that the course load in medical school would be verychallenging and therefore I decided to take as many difficult courses aspossible in preparation At first it was very difficult but theconfidence my professors had in me especially my organic chemistryprofessor Dr Callam inspired me During office hour visits DrCallam challenged me in new ways by presenting me with problems thatrequired a deep understanding of the concepts in organic chemistry aswell as other courses I realized that to succeed I need to push myselfbeyond others expectations and in the process I developed anunderstanding of my abilities to succeed in medical coursesI decided to volunteer in the Emergency Department at Mt Carmel WestHospital because again I believed that to succeed as a doctor I neededto be able to handle the stress and intensity of the environmentInstead of stress though I found care compassion
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