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Being someone born with no abnormalities and happy as can be andeverything turns sour the summer of 8th grade was very rough on myimmediate family and me Having to change the way I eat not allowedbeing in the sun turning from an ordinary girl to a girl who diagnosedwith Systemic Lupus Erythematosus was hardEven though my life has been irregular I have learned never ever giveup and forget who I was before the diagnosis Things have not been thebest since Ive been in and out of the hospital All had been goingwell I was dealing with the lupus well just my outer appearance hadchanged a little from skinny in the face to chubby Ninth grade wasgood then all of a sudden when it was time for school I have a fall outor episode I had to withdraw from school because I had pulmonary embolithat affected my lungs and caused difficulty breathing By the faith ofGod I conquered this part of my life where devil could not winBeing able to finish school and excelled in all my class and graduatethe top 15 of my class was great For the first time in a long time Ifelt good Senior year was very busy for me from cheerleading yearbookand applying for colleges all across the world Suddenly after prom Ihad to deal with the worst tragedy ever one of my best friends dyingNever feeling such depressed a day in my life instantly my world turnedfrom once again perfect to horrible Dealing with this devastationbefore graduation caused me more stress than ever and with lupus stressshould be nowhere in my vocabulary From June to December I wasdepressed and dealing with a lot causing me not to go away for schoolThis should have been the best part of my life Around January I wasback in the hospital once again and now I was kidney failure andeverything started to go wrong I was over 200 pounds five foot twothen I scared
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