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There are multiple categories through life that makes you who you are and will shape you for the rest of your life I believe I am who I am today because of my position in my family and my religious views Everyone has always told my parents that they have created a beautiful family Once my parents had signed their divorce paper our beautiful family we once had has been split Luckily my connection with my mom dad and brothers has not dulled I have always been close with my parents and my brother and I have stuck together through it all I would have to say my oldest brother Tyler is my role model He is very mentally strong in everything he does Tyler has always done well in school and was focused on what was most important to him success He is very independent but always got along with everyone Tyler rarely shows any other sides other than kind and helpful He has taught me to create goals and do what it takes to reach them To never give up and to only move forward rather than to dwell on things in the past is what he has always reminded me My brother attends Coastal Carolina in Conway SC His major is musical theater Tyler was made fun for what he liked to do and what he was good at but he never listened or let people get the best of him That is another lesson he has taught me to do what I enjoy doing and to not listen to what other people think of me The only one who matters is I and the ones I care about The ones that I care about are the ones who will support my dreams and goals There are more is more he has taught me but these are some of the reason I am who I am because of lessons from my role
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