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My little brother and I never had a really great relationship We fought often and embarrassed our parents almost every time we were in public Only one night our parents were a little beyond embarrassed Our mom had been a watching movie with us like any other normal night only when she went into the kitchen to start dinner she realized that we were completely out of milk As soon as she told us to start getting our hats and coats on we demanded that we were old enough to stay home alone for a few minutes Given the fact that I was only 8 years old and my brother was only 5 years old she was a little uneasy about it I convinced her that I would be fine watching him and that she could trust us staying alone It didnt take long before she was on board She reassured us that it would only take her ten minutes and to continue watching the movie I would say that we were fine for about the first two minutes after mom left until my brother decided that he wanted to try and take my spot on the couch I shoved him to the ground the second he became close to me His temper was always worse than most kids He filled with rage and grabbed the closest sharp object to him which so happened to be a fork that was on the coffee table He ran to me with full force I saw my life flash before my eyes I had to think fast the only thing I could think of was to do what the adults told us to do when we were in danger Call 911 As I ran down the hallway screaming and my brother chasing me I dialed as fast as I could When the operator answered I yelled HELP and hung up When I made it into my room with
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