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When Time Stops There are moments when time just stops For a brief instant your senses are heightened and you come to realize that your surroundings are much more vivid than you could ever imagine One of those times is when someone you are very close to is moments away from death even though hours ago they were in perfect health After a fun filled evening of playing pool with some friends in an atmosphere as light as a feather in the summer breeze I decided to go home and rest Just as I lay my head down upon my pillow made of clouds and sweet reverences the telephone rings with such harshness that it was like glass breaking and piercing my soul all while making my spine shake My mother knowing that I had gone to bed for the evening answered the phone and let out a shrill that burst out like a single gunshot from a twelve gauge shotgun The next few moments went by so quickly that the clocks of the world must have been spinning uncontrollably to accommodate for the time that I was about to lose On the other end of the phone was my hysterical step mother who resembles the step mother from Cinderella informing my mother that my father had just got into an accident less than a mile from his home and was being medi-flighted by helicopter to Boston At that time logic was not something that was readily available to me for I flew out of my house like batman would to a scene of a crime straight to my new car This car smelling a scent only a new car could was a shiny champagne colored standard transmission 2001 Nissan Sentra with the Sports Edition package that included all the extras and a mere 500 miles was suddenly as if hitting warp speed at points was going 120 miles an hour down
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