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My sophomore year I took a stage make-up course after school Myinstructor Maria taught me how create various face paintings - fromHollywood goddess to Frankenstein Besides the regular make-up courseshe taught me a life lesson make-up does not show what is real My search for different schools has been very difficult After lookingat and researching colleges over the past year Sarah Lawrence Collegeis one of the very few that truly appealed to me The school does nothide its distinctive multitude of extracurricular activities and clubsthat I would love to join such as Tai Chi Furthermore its campusevents such as UNIDAD meeting drew me more into applying to SarahLawrence College as the school remains strong with their diverseactivitiesWhen my doctors diagnosed me with delayed speech I was sent to variousspeech therapist After one of my speech therapists recommended that Itake acting classes to improve my delayed speech acting has turned intomy passion Now I cannot name a year that I was not in a schoolproduction As I am attending two schools one of them a part-timeinter-district arts high school I know that Sarah Lawrence College isrenowned for balancing the arts and regular academics The collegesunique educational structure of allowing students to balance arts andacademics cannot be found at any other schoolAs I am looking for a medium sized school with small class sizes andmost importantly an opportunity for success I soon realized that SarahLawrence College had all of these qualities When I was in foster careI struggled to find a home where I felt comfortable Since then I havebeen in a search of not only a place but a college that offers comfortand care to its students As that chapter closed I am determined tofind a school where I can feel more than just comfortable and isrespectable As it has been my dream to study in a college where it offers each ofeverything Sarah Lawrence College is a dream come true I believethis will help me
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