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Through high school I was actively involved in student government Imade honor roll every semester and I contributed to the community invarious ways While I enjoy acknowledging these accomplishments I mustsay that my true passion was volleyball and my dream was to playvolleyball at the collegiate level That is why I will never forget theday I was offered a volleyball scholarship to the University of WestGeorgia My scholarship was something I earned something I did formyself Although it was something I worked for years to achieve I soonrealized that accepting this alluring offer would mean moving across thecountry to a place where I knew no one and away from my beloved friendsfamily and community Yet the pursuance of my passion was enough fuelto power my decision I acceptedMy involvement in athletics through college has undoubtedly made me aninstinctively stronger willed person I witnessed administrativechanges and academic disappointments tear the team that I grew to loveapart By my senior year I was the only person of my incoming class towithstand the studying the 500 am workouts before an 800 amclass the hours stacked upon hours of practice the unbearable trips onbuses that lacked air conditioning in the summer and heat in the winterand the demanding mildly abusive coaches Sooner than expected myeligibility to participate in the sport concluded Graduationapproached at a full sprint and my desire to set new goals wasrekindled But what direction would my next steps leadI thought back to classes I attended while obtaining my bachelorsdegree and remembered finding the law focused lessons to be the mosteminent Studying law had presented itself to be an option time andtime again throughout my schooling but once I actually considered theeffort time and money that would be necessary to complete this goal Idecided interning in the field first would be the ideal and rationalplan of action Determined to find an unpaid internship I traveled fromdoor to door to the various
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