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Dance is my everything It changed my life It taught me to never give up and to be strong It taught me to be fluid and sharp all at the same time I would not be the same person I am today without dance I have no greater feeling in the world than when I am dancing I love itWhen I had my first pointe class I was extremely scared It was like when I first learned how to swim Would I like it Would I even be able to do it How hard was it going to be My heart was beating so loudly that I thought everyone around me could hear it My chest was about to explode My stomach was filled with a million butterflies My skin got instant chills My instructor called us over and sat us in a circle kind of like when my swim instructor called us into the pool and had us get in a big circle holding hands When they were explaining everything I was at ease My heart slowed down to a normal beat My skin was no longer tingly I thought to myself why was I so scared at first This is not as hard as I thought it would beMy first solo I had some of the same similarities Before I walked onto the stage I closed my eyes My heart was racing a million miles an hour I was so scared My body was on fire I couldnt breath My whole body was pulsing My dance was going through my mind over and over so I wouldnt forget the steps and embarrass myself in front of everyone I walked on stage my whole body instantly dropped I did not expect to have thousands of eyes all on me My mind went black I was frozen in place Ive never been more scared in my life All of a sudden my body was flowing
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