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One of the most important things I have learned is to never becomplacent or accepting of mediocrity The influential person who has aidedin this realization is my father He believed in every situation there isa chance to not only improve ones self but to help others I am gratefulfor the wisdom and discipline that has guided the continual growth of mycharacter and standards to which I hold myself In the many challenges Iface in choosing to lead I have learned it is never about my own successbut that of the whole team in the accomplishment of a goal I desire to earn a commission as an Army Officer because I believe mydemonstrated ability to lead a team accept responsibility and constantadaptability in making effective decisions will be of value in serving mycountry as an officer in the United States Army In my professional life taking on tasks that require more than myselfto complete is a challenge I readily accept The success of every task is adirect result of the determination and effort of a team working as a unitThrough many challenges working in a hospital allowed for my ability tolead to be tested It is there that I was rewarded and commemorated as asuccess The 17 plus hour shifts and dedication from day to daydemonstrated to the Board of Directors my motivation and personal drive toexcel I was then chosen out of 300 applicants to be a recipient ofvaluable training and education in the hospitals Tech Program Afterreceiving high marks I was selected to advance reaching the highest levelof a technician Every promotion received was into a department to which Iheld no working knowledge The associates that were assigned under mydirection had years of experience and I took every opportunity to learn inthe short amount of time allotted In working with a team I realize I as apart
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