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My dads life is like a state park with all the crisp clean and fresh air flowing through his body He makes me feel like a big somebody My dad Stacy is always caring for me giving me sunflower seeds to eat in the car and tucking me in at night His normal day start as follows 330 AM he goes to bed until 300pm This is because he works from 515 PM to 330 AM at Tysons in Dresden He gets up brushes his teeth for work and puts gel in his hair to make it stay down and not stick up He goes to his room to get dressed and then comes upstairs to see Skylar my little brother and me By 340 PM he is ready to head out the door to work My dad is my hero because he is very confident at what he does He helps me fix things that he knows that needs fixed He has helped me in many ways Like fixing toys bicycles and anything I have broken If he doesnt know how to fix something then he will read up on it until he gets it right He doesnt pretend to be a big-shot hero He acts like himself He has taught me and continues to teach me about life He is my trustworthy father because he has never lied to me about anything I can ask him anything and he will tell me the truth He has a serious side and means what he says I disobeyed him once and saw his serious side My dad told me I was grounded and I tried to get out of it I lost my freedom for a week and was grounded I concluded that he means what he says He taught me a lesson to never disobey adults ever again The hero my dad is a non-quitter I have never seen him
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