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My Great Grandma Dorothy OBrien has been the most positive and influential person I know She was nineteen and raising her adopted children while her husband was overseas fighting in World War II My Great Grandma is my Michigan hero because she is a hard worker active in the church community and is a positive role modelMy Great Grandma is a very hard worker This summer during the hottest week of July she sat outside weeding her garden wearing no sun protection except her straw hatShe said that the only way her grass would be weeded properly was if she did it herself Unfortunately because of her intense work ethic this she was hospitalized from dehydrationMy Great Grandma lives alone next door to her cousins and every night makes sure there is a well cooked meal for them to eatThese are just some of the heroic qualities my Great Grandma possessesShe makes me want to work hard do well in school and follow in her footsteps Great Grandma lives across from her churchShe used to walk to church every morning Because it is too hard for her to walk long distances right now this tradition has discontinued She is very committed to her church community and has donated time energy and home-made bread to help keep the church runningMy Great Grandma is also my hero but she gives back and helps support her community I have learned through her that it is important to give back to your community After her sister-in law and brother-in-law died she and my Great Grandpa adopted and raised their two children She moved on in life always having a glass half-full attitude even in tough situations She does not judge people and always looks for the good in people At 94 years old she still has a very positive view on her health She is starting to have - health issuesWhen she was in the hospital recently
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