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I tried to read into a few things on why people quit high school sports and as I was reading I realized that I shouldnt have to read into why they did All that matters is why I did and how I felt and acted about it There were a couple of reasons though that I could relate toQuitting softball wasnt a very hard thing for me to do seeing as though I had wanted to for some time but it wasnt easy either Softball is a great sport and like my mom said to me you cant dislike something that youre good at I agreed with her I knew that I liked softball I just didnt have a good experience with it The things that helped that cause were my teammates coaches and my prioritiesThe girls that I had for teammates were great people Outside of softball we had a great time together but like I said that was outside Inside there were a lot of things that went wrong Some of us had different opinions about things and I wasnt one of those people but I heard too much dramatic things happening What I had seen and experienced firsthand was the attitude on some of them I will admit I had a little attitude here and there but I still did what I was asked and sometimes it resulted in a positive outcome When some of them didnt get their way or a coach would point out something they needed to correct their attitude changed that instant from good to bad This also happened after a loss The girls would get really irritated with a loss and then when we had team talk they were too frustrated to listen to anything the coaches had to say unless it had to do with RBI beads The negativity would start during a game and would be passed around to everyone which would result in a
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