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What if the Board of Education of my school decided to add an extra hour to the school day I think this a wonderful idea but Ive heard people say other things Some might say that seven hours of work is already too much for students to handle which I agree with But what if it isnt work that we are doing What if my school could add elective activities that students would enjoy Maybe in that extra hour of school we could do fun activities such as wood shop Latin club physical activity or maybe even swimming We can do extracurricular activities that would expand our knowledge of the world The possibilities are interminable There could be tutoring sessions for students that need help with schoolwork There would be clubs that everybody could participate in This could be something that every student would look forward to at the end of the dayAdding an extra hour to our school day can be enjoyable for all students We dont have to do boring work the whole day we could do something exciting Ive heard people say that if students stayed in school longer they would stop paying attention and fall asleep This may be true but what if they arent listening to a teacher talk about something they find useless They could be doing something fun enjoyable and stimulating to their minds Students could participate in activities that they might not of had the chance to This could also be beneficial to students academically For those who need help with work they could see teachers for tutoringAnother argument that Ive heard is that students would be starving and not able to think straight But the solution to that dilemma is not complicated Just bring an extra snack or lunch to school The school might even be able to serve an extra lunch for the students There may be some extra expenses for that but its all
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