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It was April 19 1775 my 18th birthday Also it was start of battle Lexington and Concord My brother was in the battle fighting and mother was so worried about my brother Elijah if he was injured or deadDo not worry mother Elijah will make it through he is strong Trying to calm her down I know he is but I have a bad feeling she said My mother always cared about my brother more than me My brother was two years older than me He looked more like my mother he is tall lean dark brown eyes and brown hair just like my mother My mother is very beautiful she has long soft silk hair is about average height and has the most beautiful honey brown eyes I do not like my mother I am the opposite of her I have long blond hair dark blue eyes average height and pale skin My mother is very proper unlike me and likes to dress in fashionable dresses thats the only thing we have in common She is to proper compared to me and is a closed minded person and always say things like Too much intelligence in a lady is not good or You should have been married already Your sister Eva got married at age sixteen and youre eighteen You are now an old woman So annoyingElizabeth your father and I havent told you that you are getting an arranged marriage with one of the Chamberlin family Mother said happily What I shout surprised I know your you are surprised and happy as I am he will come here soon he shouldve come here a couple days ago nut that dreadful battle delayed his arrival I dont want to get married I thought you were happy Is there another man you want to get married--- NO I shout furious at her she never understands Dont shout thats not very
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