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This summer I went to Wisconsin Dells My parents discussed with me thatwe were going on vacation for the Fourth of July and have the bestvacation ever We had to pack our clothes and bathing suits for thetrip My dad and I took my dog Shauni to board at the vet Aftereverything back home was settled we went to to WisconsinThe ride seemed to take forever and we got bored every minute thatpassed by We got there around one in the afternoon and felt so relievedto be walking We went to the resort and got our room keys Once we gotinto our rooms we automatically relaxed and lay down After a while mysister and I were so excited to go to the theme park We finallyconvinced our parents to take us and we walked to the park Iautomatically went on the first roller coaster I set my eyes onCyclops It was fun and I really enjoyed myselfOnce the park closed we went downtown and went window shopping We saw abunch of interesting things There was this wizards maze where you hadto solve a mystery There was a Ripleys believe it or not there too Ithas a bunch of world records and some very weird things We got to go tothis amazing candy store I was able to buy all my favorite candy Whenwe left we went to see a show in the streets There was this one guy whojuggled fire and knives We started getting tire so we headed back tothe hotelThe next day we went to go eat at Dennys for breakfast It was so goodThen the whole family went for a drive around We got this three in onetour package We went ziplining speed boating and a tour in this armyvehicle It was all pretty neat My favorite though was the ziplining Welearned all these cool tricks Like how to fall and do a trust fall howdo lay down to go upside down
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