Practice: The Key to Improving as a Baseball Player

This paper stresses the importance of practice to improve as a baseball player, illustrated by a practical example.

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"You open this paper in the present tense, and you switch to past tense before the end of the first paragraph. If you put on your Ray-Ban (not “Ray Ban”) sunglasses in the present tense, then you stand in front of the ballplayers. This mixing of tenses occurs again later in this paper. You should take care not to capitalize (“He”) unnecessarily, and note that “laidback” is hyphenated. You write “We” instead of “Wes,” and “homerun” is written as two words. I see other such issues. You should review your work for these problems, and run a grammar check as well. You write an incomplete sentence (“As he stepped …”), i.e., one without a subject acted on by a verb, and “Major League Baseball” should be capitalized. You refer to two things (catching and throwing” as “it.”

Your overall story is good, and it informs. You need to sort out your narrative, pay attention to details, and be consistent in tenses. It is fine to vary the tense, but it must be consistent within a paragraph or block of text."

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(Kibin, 2024)

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Kibin. (2024). Practice: the key to improving as a baseball player. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/practice-the-key-to-improving-as-a-baseball-player-TkCem7Lz

Be sure to capitalize proper nouns (e.g. Egypt) and titles (e.g. Macbeth) in the essay title portion of your citation.

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("Practice: The Key to Improving as a Baseball Player.")

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"Practice: The Key to Improving as a Baseball Player." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/practice-the-key-to-improving-as-a-baseball-player-TkCem7Lz

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