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The Life and Legend of Florence Nightingale

This is an informative essay in which the author details the life of Florence Nightingale. The author delves into her life starting with her birth and ending with her death. Florence studied to be a nurse against her parents wishes and later become one. Nightingale fought for better conditions for injured British soldiers. Later, she wrote many books and pieces of literature that are still referenced today.
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"You have done a great job writing an essay with a clear purpose. Based on the way you have presented information, you have created a clear picture of the life of Florence. The essay is lacking an introduction. Including one would make it clearer what the goal of your essay is. According to the conclusion, this is a speech but that is not clear until the very end. There are a minor number of formatting errors throughout the essay. The most common are extra spaces between paragraphs and paragraphs being too small. Last, there are number of grammar, punctuation, and word choice errors that are making the essay harder to read. Make sure that these get resolved through a round of proofreading. "

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