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A Brief Introduction to Australia

In this essay, the student introduces the reader to Australia, providing a brief history of European settlement, description of its natural wonders (the Outback, the Great Barrier Reef), and an overview of current culture and demographics.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You deliver information in a focused manner that makes for a clear and easy-to-follow presentation that the reader appreciates. The writing is likewise effective in this regard, with a direct, lucid style that allows the reader to concentrate on the content. I question the decisions made in discussing, or eliding, the Aboriginal presence across the paper; further, lumping a focused section in between a discussion on sports and the Great Barrier Reef suggests a particular stance that your audience, depending on how you have defined the rhetorical situation, may find off-putting (ditto "bikini-clad beauties"). Avoid dehumanizing a population by treating the topic as part of the living presences of the country and not a cultural or historical artifact.

Remaining as well are some polishing-up tasks, including consistent formatting of section subheadings -- follow your style guide on this point for a tidy presentation that also demonstrates to the reader your control of the reference format."

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