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"You have what might be the beginning of an informative essay, but there's a lot of work to be done. There is no clear transition between your first and second paragraph, leaving the reader to wonder how they're connected. It's unclear what the focus of this essay is. Are you focusing on schizophrenia, nursing, interventions, or a case study?
Make sure you have an introduction and conclusion to set the stage for what you'll be discussing. Connect each paragraph and each sentence with transitions that lead your reader along a predetermined thought process. Be aware of clarity issues and improper wording (such as "ability to experience enjoyment" as a negative symptom)."
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Kibin. (2023). A brief note on the topic of schizophrenia. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/a-brief-note-on-the-topic-of-schizophrenia-aH8xYv0m
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