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A Chronological Account of the Life of Napoleon Bonaparte

This essay gives a chronological summary of the life of Napoleon Bonaparte from his time in military school to his death and reflects on his tactical genius and reforms.
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Bob's feedback:

"Your essay is easy to follow and organized well. You include many significant events from Napoleon's life; however, the paper reads more like a list of events than a narrative or analysis of his life. You mention several conflicts and victories, yet there is little context to explain their significance. Why did Napoleon go to war with England? While there's a fair amount of detail about his time at school, significant events like this are mentioned almost in passing.

Your introduction is packed with information that can be overwhelming to the reader. Remember that the introduction should only give your reader a glimpse of what you will discuss without getting into analysis.

Many of the dates given are inaccurate. For example, Napoleon was born in 1769, not 1976. Make sure to correct these."

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