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A Comparison Between Abigail in The Crucible and Lady Macbeth

This compare and contrast essay illustrates the similarities between Abigail in The Crucible and Lady Macbeth in Macbeth. The student shows that both characters are ambitious despite living in a male-dominated society.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bob's feedback:

"You've done a good job of illustrating the similarities between Abigail and Lady Macbeth. Your introduction is strong, but your conclusion delves into new topics in a jarring way. There is a fair amount of repetition that should be pared down, and several sentences are awkward or unclear. Your introduction, for example, makes it sound as if the domination of men over women is the goal of Abigail and Lady Macbeth. The grammar, spacing, sentence structure and formatting issues are significant enough to be distracting, so I would recommend working with a proofreader or editor to help you resolve these problems and strengthen your paper's presentation."

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