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A Comparison Between American and Albanian Artists

This is an analytical essay in which the author discusses how environments differ for American and Albanian artists, with a focus on music and acting. The author highlights how American musicians need managers to be successful and how well-payed American musicians are. Comparatively, Albanian artists can become famous without even being good and to really be successful need to take their talent abroad. While American has a huge film industry that is supported by Hollywood, Albania has no budget or venues for film-making.
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"You have included a lot of information about the topic that you chose to write about. Since you have included so much evidence in your essay, it is important that you include citations. Any time that you use information that you found in another source, it is critical that you credit the author if that source. If you do not, your writing could be viewed as plagiarism. Your essay does not have a clear introduction or thesis statement. Creating these would guide the reader in knowing what to expect from the rest of the essay. While you do have a conclusion, it is very basic and abrupt. Use your conclusion as an opportunity to summarize all of the main points you made throughout the essay. There are a large number of grammatical errors in your essay that make your point hard to understand. There is also a tendency for the use of conversational language rather than scholarly language."

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