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A Comparison Between Civil Liberties and Civil Rights

This is an comparison essay in which the author discusses differences between civil liberties and civil rights. The author notes how civil liberties are the result of the writing of the Constitution while civil rights are the result of a movement in the 1950s.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have provided quality information that informs readers about what civil rights and civil liberties are. You have also presented the information in a logical manner that flows smoothly. While you have an introduction, it does not include everything needed to tell the reader what they should expect in the body of the paper. Your introduction should include a general overview about civil liberties and civil rights and include a thesis statement that identifies the goal of the paper. This seems as if it is meant to be a scholarly, educational paper but you use a lot of conversational language which detracts from the validity of your information. Despite there being facts present in your paper, there are no citations. Any information that you have obtained from another source should be followed by a citation so that you can avoid plagiarism issues. There is also some information that should be elaborated upon. For instance, it is not made clear that there is a relationship between the Constitution and civil liberties. End your essay with a conclusion that summarizes the important points made in the body of the paper and reiterates the goal of the paper. "

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