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Comparison of Systems of Government in Canada and China

This essay compares and contrasts China and Canada's systems of government. The student, writing from an American perspective, finds more in common with Canada's parliamentary democracy than with China's one-party state.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"Your essay is off to a good start! I have a few suggestions for moving to the next draft. First, it's clear you've done your research in the details you provide: incorporating in-text citations will help the reader comprehend the work you've done with the sources, and also allow them to follow up on further information if they are interested. Related, I was surprised to see the phrase "I'm not sure what that means..." amongst the researched information: follow up on the definitions -- your reader is depending on you to guide them through the terms.

You have a good sense of sentence structure and flow, so make sure to proofread and catch any errors that may distract the reader from the discussion. I also encourage you to use more paragraphing: the two large blocks of text feel a little arbitrary, and they also make it hard for the reader to pick up on the moment you enter into the concluding thoughts."

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