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Learning to walk is a process that takes time to succeed in You cannot just begin to walk as soon as you are born First you learn steps leading up to walking A baby learns how to sit up to crawl eventually to hold themselves up on something and then begin to take very small steps However usually a baby will hold the hands of an adult for support before being off on their own Similarly when you write your first paper in grammar school it isnt going to be as good as a college professors Learning how to write is like learning how to walk you must take small steps to lead up to writing an exceptional paper Composition is an imperative subject for all students in order for them to take the final step and to be able to stand on their own two feet Composition not only helps a person to succeed in school but it enables you to express yourself follow the expression practice makes perfect and most of all stand on your own two feet Learning how to write enables people to express their feelings on many varieties of subjects By correctly composing a paper the reader will look further into the paper than just on the basis of grammar and punctuation Also it is easily to be distracted from the subject of the paper if it is out of order and thrown together For example a paper begins by talking about a trip to Hawaii and by the second paragraph it is talking about how the writer hates people who wear the color green The paper has no organization and jumps around from one thing to another The reader then looses the basis of the paper and has to continually re-read sections to get back on track However if a paper is written according to the writing process the reader can view the paper from the writers perspective and
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