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The History and Practice of Buddhism

This essay summarizes the history and tenets of Buddhism.
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Jim's feedback:

"You should avoid redundancy, such as “followers must follow.” Another example is your mention of the date 565 B.C. in successive paragraphs. You fail to close the quoted material in the first paragraph with a quotation mark. Punctuation should be placed inside quotation marks in American English. You misspell “event” as “even.” Avoid informal expressions such as “a lot.” Your statement on page 2, “Buddhism is a lot …,” is confusing. For example, what are “the beliefs?” Also, you mention Nepal on page 1, and you compare Buddhism to Indian religions on page 2, which creates confusion as to its origins. Your explanation of the eightfold path is confusing, as it contains incomplete sentences, i.e., those lacking a verb acting on a subject. Note also that we write “eightfold” and not “eight fold.” Instead of saying what you have not covered, your conclusion should summarize what you have said in the body of your essay."

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