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A Comparison of the Heroic Traits of the Main Characters in Beowulf and Steelheart

This essay compares the heroes in Beowulf and Steelheart. The student argues that although the characters have different traits that make them stand out, both are heroes in their own right.
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Bob's feedback:

"This is an interesting comparison, and you seem to have a strong idea of what makes both Beowulf and David heroic characters. However, your thesis seesm to be that both are heroes despite the different traits they display. The difference in traits is not made clear. What sets Beowulf and David apart? What traits does one exhibit that the other lacks? Make sure you give solid examples and support from the text. Also be sure that your quotes directly support the ideas you are presenting. For instance, is Beowulf's raw strength the best demonstration of his heroic nature? Your introduction could use some context to ensure that your topic is clear. The phrase "this type of book" needs a reference so your reader knows which type of book that is. Finally, consider having the essay proofread to address some awkward sentences and misued words."

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