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Writing Todd TurnerComposition 101596 Outdoors Or TV I think that if kids spent their time outside rather than watching TV there would be less kids in gangs and less kids causing crimes Ive noticed lately that alot of kids are in gangs and have been burglarizing houses and stores One reason why I think kids are becoming more violent and committing crimes is because they sit in front of the stupid TV all day long They dont spend enough time outdoors hunting fishing surfing and doing all those fun exciting things The outdoors offers so much to do and takes your mind off reality and into the fun world When you are outdoors you are free as a bird and there arent too many rules The one rule I go by is have fun When youre outdoors you dont have to think about being robbed or hurt by crazy people because they stay in the city If you are outdoors you cant watch TV That means that there would be fewer kids wanting to join gangs and probably less violence That would stop allot of killing and stealing in this world if every body went outdoors instead of watching TV Just think what if kids spent their time outside rather than watching TV and learning how to steal and kill Maybe our world would become a safer place Instead of watching TV I spend my time outside It is allot more fun then learning how to fight and kill each other
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