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A Concert Review of "Dimensions in Jazz" Directed by Wade Judy

In this reflective essay, a student recounts her first jazz concert: "Dimensions in Jazz" directed by Wade Judy, Eric Brush, and Marko Marcinko. The student sets the scene by providing a general description of how the other attendees dressed and conducted themselves. The student also shares her impressions of the performance, breaking it down by act.
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Angela's feedback:

"You've written a stellar account of your first jazz concert. It's great that you described the general atmosphere and shared your opinions about the different songs you heard. Your conclusion succinctly wraps up your impressions and gives the reader some key takeaways to think about. You're clearly a strong writer, but remember that commas and periods are included before closing quotation marks in American English. In addition, while you use the semicolon correctly, be careful about how often it appears in a given paragraph or work. The semicolon is a piece of punctuation best used sparingly according to standard writing conventions."

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