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As we walked along the beach we ran and spoke as freely as possible My sister and I ran about throwing sand at one anothers faces and trampled the remnants of what were once sand castles Our fun was unhindered do to the fact that we were alone aside from my parents we were the only ones for about a mile on the beach This seemed quite peculiar because it was a perfectly sunny day There were no clouds and the sky seemed to be a creamy blue the sun seemed to warmly soak into our skin and the gentle breeze seemed to wash away the burn At the same time the breeze whistled quietly threw the palm trees which when mixed with the sound of the waves and the aroma of the beach was quite intoxicating We all seemed to stop our frolicking and ponder the thought of being the only occupants of the beach We then figured we might as well have fun instead of complaining that we had the beach to ourselves The only other thing that I noticed peculiar was that the flags all along the sectioned off portion of the beach seemed to change color everyday oh how pretty My sister would state in her superficial ways of thinking but I seemed to figure that there was more to these flags than just decoration I was lost in my thoughts when it hit me a handful of sand that is I turned around only to scream out my sisters name and proceed to chase her Therefor forgetting all of my analysis about the flags which would haunt me later We are going to get some drinks kids you guys have fun and stay out of trouble I heard my parents say and with that we were off with a dash to the waters edge I was content on staying in the shallows and chasing off the fish that I could
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