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Last night I dreamt I was at a party As I went into the room everyones eyes turned towards me I could feel myself going red with embarrassement Some of the women gave me really black looks as if Id seriously offended them I got a drink and looked for someone to talk to Everyone had their backs towards me then quite out of the blue my grandfather walked into the room and came over to me I told him what had happened and he tried to reassure me I expect those women are admiring your dress he said Theyre probably green with envy I relaxed and we chatted about this and that Then suddenly my grandfather stopped talking and went as white as a sheet Whats the matter I asked You shouldnt really be here he whispered Youve had a black mark against your name ever since you admitted you couldnt swim Suddenly I saw red Ive had enough of this I screamed angrily Again everyone looked at me This is my party and if you cant be nicer to me you can all leave now I woke up feeling anxious The phone was ringing It was my grandfather That was strange enough because he only rings me once in a blue moon but what he said was even stranger Im having a party next Friday he said Can you come
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