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How good it felt to get out of a tiring hard swim practice My heart was still pounding when I got out of the cold brisk water with a smile on my face Knowing that I had just completed my first varsity practice I would have something to brag about to my friends and family I glanced across the dark pool area as all the tall muscular girls proceeded to get out of the water Being only a freshman it was a great honor for myself to be among these talented teens As I proudly walked across the slippery deck our team captain called out for a varsity meeting I figured I would stroll over there since I did complete a full practice on varsity and I figured I worked just as hard as the upperclassmen I walked with great stride towards the captain knowing I was one of only two freshmen practicing with varsity As I approached the group of girls my friend Jessica also proceeded to go with me to the huddle of swimmers We both looked at each other and smiled knowing that we had accomplished an event that would change our next four years of high school Jessica had a huge smile that covered her face and her teeth had braces on them so it made it hard to see her small teeth She has a short chubby young freshman with blonde always done hair Her crystal blue eyes gave her an innocent look as she looked back at me She also had a cute round nose that made her look like she was younger than the most of us As Jessica and I stepped on the tips of our toes to get a glance of the captain our team captain began to speak Varsity we are all going to have a team party she shouted out loud as she glanced around with her demon-like eyes Her eyes
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